My heartbeat pounding in my ears,
Your fingertips barely gliding over my skin.
The sweat rolls off my shivering body,
Inwardly awaiting your next move- anxious.
Anticipation, longing, desire,
All of these are doing the thinking for me now.
My legs wrap around your waist,
Tugging your hips forth to mold against mine.
Your warm breath fans against my cheek,
Then my neck, shoulder, collar bone.
Lower, lower, lower still,
I want you to keep going down.
Yet your lips instead capture my own,
Our tongues tussling with a firey resolve.
Hands begin to wander aimlessly,
Touching and groping at forbidden places.
We entwine our bodies together,
Gasping and panting through the lust filled haze.
This time is just one of many to come,
For I often feel the burn of that inner fire.
















Devious Comments
Comments
I've wanted to write something like this for sooo long but I can't ever get past the first line!
I think its awesome!
--
"Living is a dream but a dream is worth living for."
--
Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one. - Stella Adler
Thank you so very much! I really appreciate it!
I thought I'd never do this one, either, but I did! I am sure you will get yours done, it will just take the right amount of inspiration to get it going.
--
--
--
--
if it's never dark, how you gonna know the sun when it shines
what inspired you exactly?
--
"We can either be good little boys and girls, go to college and get married, or...By God, we can let our demons loose and just wail on" Quentin Cassidy (fictional character) from the book Once a Runner
okay seriously, this is good, great job for your first erotic postageness. love the ending, nice imagery
glad you posted it too
--
Officially Smiting with Sporks since 1982.
Previous Page12345Next Page