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Feeling the Fire by *leopardivory:iconleopardivory:





My heartbeat pounding in my ears,
Your fingertips barely gliding over my skin.
The sweat rolls off my shivering body,
Inwardly awaiting your next move- anxious.
Anticipation, longing, desire,
All of these are doing the thinking for me now.
My legs wrap around your waist,
Tugging your hips forth to mold against mine.
Your warm breath fans against my cheek,
Then my neck, shoulder, collar bone.
Lower, lower, lower still,
I want you to keep going down.
Yet your lips instead capture my own,
Our tongues tussling with a firey resolve.
Hands begin to wander aimlessly,
Touching and groping at forbidden places.
We entwine our bodies together,
Gasping and panting through the lust filled haze.
This time is just one of many to come,
For I often feel the burn of that inner fire.
©2004-2009 *leopardivory
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Submitted: March 14, 2004
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My first erotic poem. Gasp! I was slightly hesitant to submit this at first.. but with all the other erotic poems out there, I figured, why not?

Stock photo was taken from ~ vampiresa-stock and altered with PSP 8. Enjoy!
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:jawdrop: I LOVE it!! :thumbsup:
I've wanted to write something like this for sooo long but I can't ever get past the first line!
I think its awesome!:clap: :+fav: :nod: It deserves it!

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"Living is a dream but a dream is worth living for."
I love it! You have guts girl! I'd feel strange uploading something so personal! :+fav:! Loved it!

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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one. - Stella Adler
:D!!

Thank you so very much! I really appreciate it! :hug:

I thought I'd never do this one, either, but I did! I am sure you will get yours done, it will just take the right amount of inspiration to get it going. :)

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:star-empty: ..I'm better off alone anyway.. :star-empty:
Thank you, babe! :D I appreciate it, tons, because I was so unsure of even submitting it. Glad you liked it! :hug:

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:star-empty: ..I'm better off alone anyway.. :star-empty:
Rofl!! It made you blush! Muahaha! =P

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:star-empty: ..I'm better off alone anyway.. :star-empty:
Good poem :heart: I love it !

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if it's never dark, how you gonna know the sun when it shines
how true how true :-p
what inspired you exactly? ;-)
Props to you on having the guts to submit it. It was very good I thought. Packed with imagery and emotion. So I think for your first one erotic submission, it's good stuff.

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"We can either be good little boys and girls, go to college and get married, or...By God, we can let our demons loose and just wail on" Quentin Cassidy (fictional character) from the book Once a Runner
ummmmmm.. i dont see any sausage. lol!

okay seriously, this is good, great job for your first erotic postageness. love the ending, nice imagery :D

glad you posted it too ;)

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